Hello My name is Moonlight and welcome to my blog.
To Be Honest this was kind of hard because I rushed this cause I didn't have much time so I was wondering if I made any mistakes you could comment down below whats wrong and also correct me .
Wednesday, 2 January 2019
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Hi Moonlight,
ReplyDeleteIt's Leslie here with the Summer Learning Journey team. I appreciate your explanation that you were a bit rushed when doing this activity.
You've started to re-tell the story of the Seven Stars of Matariki, but you haven't included the part that explains how the sisters became stars, shining in the night sky.
To earn full points it would be helpful for you to keep on with your story, describing how it was that the sisters ended up as stars.
Perhaps you could try listening to the author read the story aloud. There's a link to this reading on the Week 3 Day 4 Activity 2 page of the website.
It's totally up to you as to whether or not you want to have another go at this posting, to complete the story and earn more points. I'll check back to see what you've chosen to do.
Meanwhile, I hope you're having a really nice day and I hope you'll keep working on this program. You're doing so well!
Cheers,
Leslie