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Thursday 4 January 2018

By Moonlight crossing the Tasman hope you like (:


                                       by Moonlight hope you like it (:

1 comment:

  1. Hi Moonlight,

    I like that you’ve described how frightening it would feel being a member of the flight crew, especially wanting to get to land as soon as possible. Had you thought about how you would write this as a poem?

    Remember, the activity is asking that you write a poem describing how you would’ve felt, here is a website with different types of poems that you could use:

    https://www.buzzle.com/articles/types-of-poems-for-kids.html

    Explore the different types and see if there is one you’d like to use. I would love to give you full points for this activity but can only do so once you complete your poem. You could definitely use some of what you’ve already written.

    Glad to see you blogging again, keep it up!

    Toe feiloa’i fo’i,

    Cia.

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